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Cách viết bài luận "Think of a person that you really admire" tiếng anh

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Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách viết bài luận "Think of a person that you really admire" tiếng anh

I. Đề bài

Think of a person that you really admire. Write a description of this person

II. Từ vựng

III. Phân tích

1. Bố cục

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Đề bài Think of a person that you really admire hoàn toàn giống với IELTS SPEAKING PART 2 dạng mô tả người mà IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn về bước triển khai 
  • Có thể tham khảo bám sát vào các gợi ý sau đây để lập dàn bài và viết bài:
    • Think of a person you admire

    1. what relation this person is to you;

    2. what are your first memories of this person;
    3. how often you see this person.
    4. and explain why you really admire this person.

Như vậy bố cục bài viết sẽ theo bố cục tương ứng với việc trả lời 4 câu hỏi như sau:

  • Introduction (mở bài) - Trả lời câu hỏi 1: what relation this person is to you
  • Body (thân bài)
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 2+3: (what are your first memories of this person + how often you see this person)
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 4: and explain why you really admire this person (khi trả lời body 2 sẽ bao gồm 2 main ideas)
      • Main idea 1: (Sau câu main idea sẽ có Supporting idea / Example)
      • Main idea 2:  (Sau câu main idea sẽ có Supporting idea / Example)
  • Conclusion (kết luận) - Paraphrase lại introduction 

2. Bài mẫu

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Bài mẫu sẽ bám sát theo bố cục phía trên mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn 

2.1. Introduction (mở bài) - Trả lời câu hỏi 1: what relation this person is to you

Usually, people may admire a celebrity or a well-known businessmen/women, but for me, I’d like to mention Linh who is my girlfriend. In fact, I have known her since high school but not until our sophomore year in university that we started dating, and she is definitely one of a few people that I admire a lot.

2.2. Body (thân bài)

2.2.1. Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 2+3: (what are your first memories of this person + how often you see this person)

I still remember the first time we got to know each other was during our class reunion in �Da Nang. To be honest, the conversation started in a formal manner, but ended up being just like an intimate chat between close friends because we shared so many common things in our interests and background. Now, We are in a distant relationship now and because of the different time zone, we can’t talk frequently but I’m trying to get close to her as soon as possible.

2.2.2. Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 4: and explain why you really admire this person

There are many reasons why I hold her in high regard. Firstly, she is not only a beautiful girl but also a logical and intelligent person. To be more precise, she always see things under multiple perspectives and never assume or judge anybody or anything. Secondly, she’s also very diligent. As a matter of fact, she’s already paying for her sister tuition fee and provide for herself conveniently. That is why I admire her as a person so much.

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